Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?

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for the working population of the nation irrespective of the professional background to be unethical. It is

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argued that those who work under challenging working conditions should be given the freedom to withdraw from their careers at an early

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. In my opinion, I am generally in agreement with

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notion and governments have to be more considerate while taking

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crucial state decisions. Adhering to a set

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negatively affects one’s personal desires, it reduces the flexibility and ability of an individual to decide on his or her future perspectives.

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, workers who prefer to take early

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in order to spend more time with their families are refrained due to

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national regulations.

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is correlated with the level of a person’s psychological capability to work for an employer,

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, it is a fundamental human right to be free to choose when to bid farewell to one’s career. Moving on to the occupations that explicitly require an early

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are those which are associated with high levels of physical involvement. Whereas employees who are in the field of construction, carpentry, or even athletes, for that matter, are often prone to retire from their work-life much earlier, compared to professions

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as teachers or administration staff. In conclusion, personally, I believe that

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depends on an individual's professional and personal circumstances, and

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, cannot be generalized,

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, governments should consider fixing lower

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limits for those who are engaged in challenging working conditions.