Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give our

It is believed that recently

people

have become more approachable due to distinct technologies whereas other

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think that modern devices are damaging social skills. As for me, with

inventions

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of smartphones and distinct applications, social interactions have come in a fresh way which improves our status in society and makes us more sociable.

Although

it has a negative side as well which

also

be discussed in the following paragraphs.

First

of all, it is vital to point out that when new technology was developed

people

were getting used to it by discovering

core

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in using it and different applications. As an illustration, originally the purpose of social media was to meet and message

to

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a potential friend even if it was a stranger.

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assisted to advance

communicating

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with native

people

which

then

resulted

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perfect social skills in real life. By talking or messaging, human

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tend to better understand the atmosphere of the conversation and how to keep

this

conversation up

as a result

people

were acting more sociable.

On the other hand

,

people

are becoming more

addictive

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to new technologies.

Moreover

, it can be applied to applications that

keeps

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people

engaged with their phones or laptops.

This

kind of

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lifestyle

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life-style

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causes them to turn into anti-sociable

individual

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.

For instance

, in

Japan

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there is a term

such

as Hikikomori which is corresponded

for

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those

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of society that

are

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allocating their time

on

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sitting in front of personal computers or smartphones. Usually, they are locked inside their room without going outside which decreases human interactions and as a rule makes them lonely. In conclusion, as I mentioned before, it goes without saying that technical things have given us dozens of opportunities to be more sociable.

However

, it is recommended to avoid detrimental

influence

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such

as addiction in order to not lose connection with reality.