Nowadays many people believe that children should be taught history in schools, however, others argue that children should learn subjects that are more helpful for modern everyday life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In modern times, there is a debate whether pupils should study either
history
or applicable
subjects
to their lives. I personally believe that it is essential to add useful and historical
subjects
to the syllabus. On one hand, the
history
of any
country
is
considerd
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considered
as an integral part of the national
culture
which is why I think that
children
must learn about the
history
of their own
country
to be specific in schools.
this
will help to fully transfer the
culture
and traditions to one generation and another,
therefore
, the
country
itself will save the
culture
by teaching
history
to
children
.
for example
, In my
country
, we start learning about our
country
's
history
from a young age and
this
really helps with conserving our
culture
.
that is
the reason why
children
should be taught historical
subjects
.
On the other hand
, due to the significant developments in today's life,
children
must be given helpful
subjects
in order to keep tracing the improvements like computer skills and time management.
For example
,
children
nowadays are attracted to their screens which is why they should learn how to manage their time between playing and studying so they do not spend their free time on technology and leave their tasks
beside
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besides
show examples
. so, because of
the developments
Change to a genitive case
the children of the development
show examples
children
should take at least two useful
subjects
for their day-to-day life. To conclude, In my point of view, teachers should teach
children
both:
history
and helpful
subjects
so as to transfer and save the
country
's
culture
and help students in their daily tasks.
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