Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars and riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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It has become a matter of debate for the majority of the folk is
road
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safety .Some of them opine that if we make changes in the legal
age
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of drivers for both cars and riding motorbikes
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there could be fewer expectations of
road
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accidents
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.I totally agree with
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given notion.A number of arguments surround my opinion . To commence with ,In many nations legal
age
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of driving is 18 above .At
this
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age
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,
teenagers
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eagerly
waits
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to get a licence.Some of them do not know all
road
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signs and they obtain
licence
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licences
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illegly
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illegally
.After getting it they come on
highway
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the highway
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and perform stunts in groups .
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the main reason
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accidents
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.
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instance
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in
India
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four kids died on the highway when they were performing stunts at night .
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,At
this
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age
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,they get everything very
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serious
and I believe patience is the key
of
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driving .
Teenagers
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always get in
hurry
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a hurry
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.That leads to
rule breaking
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.Research has shown that 50
percent
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of traffic rules
teenagers
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break every year.What is more,Folk gets
in
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under
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peer pressure always .Their peer
pressure
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them to do racing and
drinking
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alcohal
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alcohol
while driving .
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,the driving test should be taken very strictly
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legally .There should be zero
persent
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per cent
of
chance
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a chance
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of any cheating .In my opinion ,
legal
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the legal
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age
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of driving must be 21 .
Then
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we can predict changes in the
road
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accidents
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numbers .When a teenager
turn
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turns
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into
adult
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an adult
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and become a responsible citizen . To sum up,we ensure
road
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safety by taking small steps as increasing
legal
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the legal
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age
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of driving .As I mentioned,
teenagers
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performs
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stunts and racing ,drinking while driving that lead to
accidents
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • minimum legal age
  • increase road safety
  • maturity
  • rash decision-making
  • cognitive functions
  • risky behavior
  • traffic congestion
  • urban areas
  • core issues
  • proper training
  • adherence to traffic rules
  • road conditions
  • vehicle maintenance
  • stricter driving tests
  • enhancing road safety
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