Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars and riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It has become a matter of debate for the majority of the folk is

road

safety .Some of them opine that if we make changes in the legal

age

of drivers for both cars and riding motorbikes

then

there could be fewer expectations of

road

accidents

.I totally agree with

this

given notion.A number of arguments surround my opinion . To commence with ,In many nations legal

age

of driving is 18 above .At

this

age

,

teenagers

eagerly

waits

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to get a licence.Some of them do not know all

road

signs and they obtain

licence

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licences

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illegly

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illegally

.After getting it they come on

highway

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the highway

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and perform stunts in groups .

That is

the main reason

of

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for

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accidents

.

For

instance

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in

India

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,India

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four kids died on the highway when they were performing stunts at night .

Moreover

,At

this

age

,they get everything very

seriuos

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serious

and I believe patience is the key

of

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driving .

Teenagers

always get in

hurry

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a hurry

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.That leads to

rule breaking

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.Research has shown that 50

percent

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per cent

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of traffic rules

teenagers

break every year.What is more,Folk gets

in

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under

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peer pressure always .Their peer

pressure

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them to do racing and

drinking

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alcohal

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alcohol

while driving .

Finally

,the driving test should be taken very strictly

also

legally .There should be zero

persent

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per cent

of

chance

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a chance

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of any cheating .In my opinion ,

legal

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the legal

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age

of driving must be 21 .

Then

we can predict changes in the

road

accidents

numbers .When a teenager

turn

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into

adult

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an adult

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and become a responsible citizen . To sum up,we ensure

road

safety by taking small steps as increasing

legal

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the legal

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age

of driving .As I mentioned,

teenagers

performs

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stunts and racing ,drinking while driving that lead to

accidents

.