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It is observed that communication between family members in today's time is less as compared to the past. However, some people do not think so. Do you agree or disagree?

#communication #members #time #people
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FOOD
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food
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 evolution for consumers in the era of healthy and quality
food
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 for better living. - MEDICAL
FOOD
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 In response to medical care with future
food
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 innovation to replace medicine and supplementary for patient’s care and recovery. - ORGANIC
FOOD
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 - In response to modern consumers who are fond of
quality
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 and safety of ingredients in their consumption. - NOVEL
FOOD
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 The new
food
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 era with a new way of production that shifts consumption
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