In many schools, sports lessons are part of the timetable because it is important for both boys and girls to participate in sports. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Today, in plenty of schools,

sport

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lessons

are

partial

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of the curriculum because it is substantial for both

boys

and

girls

to take part in

this

event. In my

opinion

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it is essential too

,

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since

sport

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activities make them

health

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and joining in these

lessons

can help them have more accountability in the future.

To begin

with, participating in

sport

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lessons

can improve the physical and mental health of

boys

and

girls

.

That is

, if they do

sport

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activities, they will both have less stress and help them to keep fit. A good illustration of

this

is taking part

boys

and

girls

in morning exercises in a friendly atmosphere make them

to

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decrease their stress and it promotes physical health equally.

This

in turn will

expresses

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the importance of the existence of

sport

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lessons

.

In addition

, another reason for the

significantly

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presence of these classes for

boys

and

girls

is, the more taking part in

this

statement, the more have social interaction in their lives in the future. To put it differently, when they do

sport

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activities as a team, they will learn to be

responsibility

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, and they will

also

more

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able to accept the consequences of their action. Take students who are

as

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a member of

football

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team

for example

; everyone will have a special responsibility in the team, and only if all players cooperate, they will succeed. In conclusion, the existence of these classes is necessary for

boys

and

girls

because

this

help

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them both to keep fit and it makes them interplay socially in the future.