Internet should be used for children. Do you agree?

The

Internet

is an essential part of day-to-day life. The

internet

has become so popular that even

children

are having easy access to the

internet

and handheld devices. Even though the

internet

has made life easy for

children

there are some other aspects which are to be considered. We can discuss the merit and demerits of

this

internet

usage in the following paragraphs. The

Internet

has made the

world

closer;

this

enables

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children

to interact with their peers in an easy and comfortable way.

Additionally

, it allows them to take advantage of easy access to the

world

of knowledge,

for

instance

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earlier, to get information about something

children

need

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to refer to a lot of books and other stuff to get a single piece of information but with the

internet

has eased these efforts.

On the contrary

, the

internet

comes with a lot of adverse effects on

Children

.

Firstly

, it makes them addicted to

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technology in the earlier stages of life where they are ought to explore the

world

.

Secondly

, their relationship with

outside

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world

sores.

Finally

, it can damage their eyes and character.

Internet

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with both positives and negatives, it is the parents who must control and provide guidance so that

children

can be benefitted

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the

internet

.