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What do you think about the influence of the Internet on children?

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In recent years, there has been a growing debate about whether many people think the Internet is affecting and influencing children's lives. It is put forward by some people that it is advantageous. The opponent,
on the other hand
, argues that there are several drawbacks.
This
 essay will identify both the benefits and drawbacks surrounding
this
 issue before coming to a reasoned conclusion. The Internet has made the world closer;
this
 enables students to interact with their peers in an easy and comfortable way.
Additionally
, it allows them to take advantage of easy access to the world of knowledge,
for
instance
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 earlier, to get information about something children
need
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to need
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 to refer to a lot of books and other stuff to get a single piece of information but technology has eased these efforts. Regardless of its endless advantages, it has some disadvantages.
Firstly
, it makes them addicted to technology in the earlier stages of life where they are ought to explore nature.
Secondly
, their relationship with the outside world sores.
Finally
, it can damage their character and behaviour.
For instance
, some of the websites could include violence or sexual abuse if the underage child does not know how to avoid them it could affect their life. To sum, it can be observed that there are both benefits and ill effects in relation to whether the Internet is good or bad for children. The parents and elders should be responsible for controlling and providing guidance to their kids on how to make proper utilization of technology.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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