These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Currently, there is much discussion with regard to moving out from the hometown.It is argued that there are a

lot

of

people

who

move

to the

city

when they are mature. I believe that there are a

lot

of advantages for moving to the

city

which was developed

such

as the

city

has a

lot

of

companies

which is international

companies

or huge

companies

and they can reach educations in the

city

which has quality but there is a disadvantage that can not be overlooked

such

as the

traffic

congestion is the norm in the

city

. On the one side of benefits when

people

grow up and

move

to the

city

. The principal advantage is that has a

lot

of

companies

which is accepted worldwide and they have a

lot

of opportunities for getting the job.

For example

,

Bangkok

is the capital of Thailand. There is a

lot

of rural

people

moving to

Bangkok

for finding a job because has a

lot

of departments that

companies

would like to hire.

Furthermore

,

companies

in

Bangkok

which is enormous

companies

and international

companies

such

as Shoppee company , CP company which has a good paid.

In contrast

, most

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of

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the

companies

in rural are factories.

In addition

, The

city

has a

lot

of universities and

people

can reach educations that are very convenient.

For instance

,

Bangkok

has a

lot

of good universities which is guaranteed worldwide and got top rank

university

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universities

show examples

such

as CU , TU or KU. Everyone can learn and get free courses for developing with the life from the university .

Hence

,

people

in urban would like to

move

to the

city

which was developed.For good life and quality life.

On the other hand

, there is a negative side to

this

city

such

as the

traffic

is very bad. A good case at

this

point is

Bangkok

has

traffic

which is very terrible. The worker has to drive a car to go to the office for at least 1 hour because the

traffic

is very bad.

Nevertheless

, urban does not have a problem with

traffic

. In conclusion, the present day there are a

lot

of

people

from rural

move

to the

city

because the

city

has a

lot

of benefits

such

as chances for finding the job or educations that everyone can reach but there is a negative side that

people

can not be overlooked as the

traffic

is bad.