More and more people want to buy clothes, cars and other products from well-known brands. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

I OBSTINATELY BELIEVE THAT IT HAS MORE TURN DOWN EFFECT IF MOST OF THE PUBLIC SEEKING TO PURCHASE DRESSES,VEICHELS OR DIFFERENT PRODUCTS FROM RENOWNED COMPANIES. THERE ARE SEVERAL CAUSES BEHIND
THIS
. IN
THIS
UPCOMING
FIRST
PARAGRAPH WE WILL DISCUSS THE POSSIBLE REASONS AND
SECONDLY
WHY IT HAS A NEGATIVE IMPACT ON EVOLUTION. TO COMMENCE WITH, THERE ARE VARIOUS BRANDS ARE AVAILABLE IN SHOPPING MALLS OR IN SUPERMARKETS AS THEY ARE PRETTY MUCH POPULAR WORLDWIDE. IT BRINGS CUSTOMERS AS THEY ARE WELL-KNOWN. IN
THIS
ERA OF MODERNISATION YOUNG YOUTHS ARE INTO IT AND ALWAYS LOOKING FOR THE LATEST TRENDS. SO THEY BUY THE NEWEST VERSION TO KEEP THEMSELVES UPDATED.
FOR EXAMPLE
, IF NIKE OR REEBOOK LAUNCH ANY NEW SHOE , EVERYONE WILL EAGER TO BUY IT WITHOUT LOOKING AT ITS PRICE TAG.ANOTHER POSSIBLE REASON COULD BE TRUST AS THEY ARE FAMOUS ANYONE CAN REACH TO CUSTOMER SERVICE AND CAN EASILY GET REFUND IF ANY PROBLEM THEY MIGHT FACE.
ALTHOUGH
IT IS DIRECTLY OR INDIRECTLY AFFECTING LOCAL BUSINESSES. WEAVER,CRAFTS SELLERS ARE FACING A FINANCIAL CRISIS DUE TO
THIS
GIGANTIC GROWTH OF THAT PRODUCTS.
THIS
IS NOT ONLY ECONOMICALLY AFFECTING THEM BUT
ALSO
PSYCHOLOGICALLY GETTING UPSET.
FOR EXAMPLE
,IN INDIA SAREE HAS ALWAYS BEEN A TRADITIONAL WEAR BUT THESE DAYS IT IS REPLACED BY WESTERN WEAR TO SOME EXTENT. DUE TO
THIS
LOCAL ENTREPRENEURS ARE AT THEIR LOSS AND STRUGGLING FOR THEIR EXISTENCE. TO CONCLUDE WITH, IN MY VIEW
THIS
FASHIONABLE AND TRENDY PRACTICE ALWAYS COMES
FIRST
TO THE NEW GENERATION BUT
THIS
MODERN EXPLANATION DESTROYING GROWTH OF LOCALS.
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