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Some people say music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Nowadays,
music
 has become an integral part of human life as it is been used by different age groups throughout the world, without any language or cultural restrictions. From my point of view, I strongly agree with
this
 idea.
Firstly
, Westen countries, like the USA, has a wide range of
music
that is
 been followed by their people, but in recent years they started listening to various other
music
, and begin to collaborate with other musicians.
For example
, Korean
music
 which is referred to as K-pop
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 is an entirely different language,
instead
, American people begin to listen to these songs allowing them to perform concerts in their country.
Secondly
, for videotaping a song an artist tend to visit various places other than their city
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 and introduce other culture in their albums.
For instance
, recently a band called Coldplay
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 has visited India, for an album and the entire song was shot in various locations which have the cultural diversity of that nation. In conclusion,
music
 can bring various traditions into society, and it can be enjoyed from a toddler to a senior citizen without any barrier.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural diversity
  • harmony
  • integration
  • bridging gaps
  • foster
  • ignite
  • embrace
  • communicate
  • celebrate
  • appreciate
  • inclusivity
  • universal language
  • emotional resonance
  • shared experiences
  • intercultural dialogue
  • intergenerational connections
  • cultural exchange
  • catalyst
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