write a descriptive paragraph about My favourite place in my hometown

Last
Saturday was my friend
Lisa’s
14th birthday. She invited me over to celebrate her big day together with her friends and family. When I arrived at her house, the door was open but nobody was there. Confused, I started to look around. The house was illuminated by the golden sunlight which penetrated the
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windows and just as I turned my head, I saw
stairs
that went upwards. I decided to go upstairs and see if Lisa and others were there. The wooden
stairs
squeaked under my steps and dust particles fell from them. At the end of the
stairs
, I saw three rooms with closed doors. Silently, I walked toward the
first
door and opened it. As soon as I opened the door, fresh air filled my lungs and I was in
Lisa’s
room
, which I have recognized by the pictures on the wall. It was not the tidiest
room
but it was certainly the most comfortable
room
I had ever seen. The whole
room
felt very inviting and the atmosphere is relaxing. At
first
glance, the windows are wide open and a sweet breeze filled the
room
with a sense of summer and the scent of flowers. The white curtain was blowing by the wind and gave a splendid view
to
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the garden.
Lisa’s
bed was at the one end of the
room
while a table stood at the other. Her bed had
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sheets and pillows were piled casually around every corner of the bed. At the other end of the
room
, there was a big table with piles of papers and pencils. I know that
Lisa’s
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hobby is drawing and it is almost magical how she is able to transform blank papers into
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pictures. Undoubtful, she was performing the exact same trick in her
room
several hours before. I did not wish to be impolite, so I went out
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Lisa’s
room
and started to walk through the corridor. Suddenly, I heard someone calling my name. I ran to the
next
open window and saw Lisa standing in the garden. She was laughing and asked me how I get there which I answered with honesty. I told her that I
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she was upstairs and ran down the
stairs
to meet her in the garden.
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