write a descriptive paragraph about My favourite place in my hometown

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Saturday was my friend

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14th birthday. She invited me over to celebrate her big day together with her friends and family. When I arrived at her house, the door was open but nobody was there. Confused, I started to look around. The house was illuminated by the golden sunlight which penetrated the

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windows and just as I turned my head, I saw

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that went upwards. I decided to go upstairs and see if Lisa and others were there. The wooden

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squeaked under my steps and dust particles fell from them. At the end of the

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, I saw three rooms with closed doors. Silently, I walked toward the

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door and opened it. As soon as I opened the door, fresh air filled my lungs and I was in

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room

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, which I have recognized by the pictures on the wall. It was not the tidiest

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but it was certainly the most comfortable

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I had ever seen. The whole

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felt very inviting and the atmosphere is relaxing. At

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glance, the windows are wide open and a sweet breeze filled the

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with a sense of summer and the scent of flowers. The white curtain was blowing by the wind and gave a splendid view

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the garden.

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bed was at the one end of the

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while a table stood at the other. Her bed had

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sheets and pillows were piled casually around every corner of the bed. At the other end of the

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, there was a big table with piles of papers and pencils. I know that

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favorite

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hobby is drawing and it is almost magical how she is able to transform blank papers into

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pictures. Undoubtful, she was performing the exact same trick in her

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several hours before. I did not wish to be impolite, so I went out

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Lisa’s

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room

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and started to walk through the corridor. Suddenly, I heard someone calling my name. I ran to the

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open window and saw Lisa standing in the garden. She was laughing and asked me how I get there which I answered with honesty. I told her that I

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she was upstairs and ran down the

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to meet her in the garden.