The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the healthcare system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that way to deal with the problem is to introduce more physical education in school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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of all, I believe that a more necessary thing than providing more physical education

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in educational facilities is the improvement of eating habits. Many countries have already executed sufficient physical

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in school.

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, in the case of Germany and France, they perform 4 hours or more physical training classes per week. It is seldom different from the time of main subjects

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as literature, mathematics, English. Despite these numerous physical education hours, the rising juvenile obesity phenomenon is associated with their dietary habits. We can know through the United States’ example. America is the country that affords the most advanced fitness

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both qualitatively and quantitatively in the academy .

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, the country’s adolescent obesity rate is the worst among OECD nations. The States is well known that consume excessive calories, sugar, and sodium.

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, above all things, schools and parents should attempt the pickup of their children's diet to address

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social problem .

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, it can be a more effective approach that schools and the

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offer enjoyable after-school physical

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to students and induce them to participate in the

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. Compared to the past, in most countries, after-school pupils’ physical activity hours have considerably decreased, whereas physical education classes have gradually increased. All over the world, youth exercise amounts have declined above 20% compared to around two to three decades. According to several reliable investigations, it is related to young people’s leisure.

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, various educational organizations and parents need to encourage by utilizing practical means, which their children exercise more. In conclusion, I firmly believe that providing more physical training is not a realistic way to cope with the growing obese population.