Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion ?

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few decades, there is a considerable increase in the number of species

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are put

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the red list. Many people claim that governments and

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the public

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should fund more on the protection of animals, whereas opponents of

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statement maintain that it worth spending

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in

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other projects. There are many reasons why

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money

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on protecting animals is necessary.

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, due to habitat destruction , which is commonly caused by deforestation and global warming, many

animal

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animals

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can’t

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adapt

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adopt

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fast enough.

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, funding for reserves is crucial.

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have shown, a lot of species are on the verge of extinction, as the result, breeding

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need to be

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to increase the number of cubs and maintain their popularity.

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, poachers are a threat to them so that

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governments

have to

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on parols to protect

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and fight against them. On the other

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, budgets can be spent on various other

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might

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be spend

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on educating children to raise awareness . The future generation will appreciate

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and poaching will reduce. In fact, in many countries which have

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a low living standard, people tend to do hunting for their living. By helping to raise

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ecomonic

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economic

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people

bring benefits to

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and

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. In conclusion, It is true that funding in parols, reserves brings many benefits to animals.

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,

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also

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need

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to be spent on other activities

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as education and

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. Having considered both sides, I firmly believe that

money

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should be spent on

wildlife

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protection.