news stories on TV and newspapers are very often accomplaint by pictures. some people say that this picture are more effective than words what is your opinion about this?

#news #stories #tv #newspapers #accomplaint #pictures #people #picture

picture

can depict the whole story in

people

’s minds and it is more easily guide

people

to understand and remember a circumstance

instead

of reading thousands of words.

Hence

, I insist with numerous

people

’s views that it is more effective to attach pictures along with stories rather than just articles. On the one hand, a

picture

can express lots of information at

first

sight. According to the research,

people

can imagine and supplement

further

information from a

picture

which is means that readers can get as much information from a

picture

first

sight rather than read a whole article and to get understand the occurrence. The

picture

attached

to the news could attract the reader’s attention and it is quite more efficient than sentences.

On the other hand

, a

picture

can prove authenticity. There is no doubt that more and more press would use exaggerated sentences to depict the stories in order to capture the attention of readers. If there is a

picture

which was recorded the true situation that happened,

then

the whole news would be more reliable.

For instance

, In 2020, there was a rebellion in HONGKONG, there is a Western press report that one of the police

officer

Change to a plural noun

officers

show examples

threatens the civilians with a gun.

AS a result

, a photo posted on the TIKTOK shows there are some

people

throwing a chemical tool toward to police officer.

Picture

not only can prove the truth but

also

limited the fake new publishing . To conclude, the

picture

along with an article could help

people

get a better understanding of the occurrence,

also

can prove the authenticity of the news which is more efficient than sentences.

Submitted by jingmelbourne2016 on Thu Mar 03 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

10Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

279 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6.5
band
In many countries, the average life expectancy has been increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and for society as a whole? Suggest some solutions.
Thanks to the development of medical science , humans could live longer. So this trend could lead to some burdens for society. In this essay, I will discuss the main hassles and then provide some advice to manage them.
4.5
band
In many countries, children do not do physical exercises as much as before and the tend to become more and more overweight. What are the reasons and solutions of this.
Today, children do not work out regularly exercises that they are becoming fat. In this essay, l will attempt to shed on the causations of this trend and will propose some rational outcomes it gives rise to.
7.5
band
Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?
It is a fact that some things which are made of plastic pose harmful effects on the environment. This essay will discuss some possible negative impacts of them, as well as suggest some measures which governments and individuals can take in order to address this problem.
5.5
band
Schools should stop using books for teaching to learn as they find them boring, and use films, TV and computers instead. To what extent do you agree with this?
Many people argue that books are not effective as as films and other digital sources for educating school kids. While both of these sources are not bad either, It is worth comparing between both. In this essay, we will discuss the aspects of books which outweigh digital sources
5
band
Living in a country where you have to speak a foregin language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Today we live in an era which the whole Earth has shrunk and become a global village. More an more people choose to seek job opportunities and pursue further studies overseas, meanwhile, the language barrier becomes a major concern. To some extent, I agree with that speaking a foregin language can result in issues such as misunderstanding and adapting to a new environment, but I believe these problems can be solved.

news stories on TV and newspapers are very often accomplaint by pictures. some people say that this picture are more effective than words what is your opinion about this?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

In many countries, the average life expectancy has been increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and for society as a whole? Suggest some solutions.

In many countries, children do not do physical exercises as much as before and the tend to become more and more overweight. What are the reasons and solutions of this.

Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

Schools should stop using books for teaching to learn as they find them boring, and use films, TV and computers instead. To what extent do you agree with this?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foregin language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?