Some believe that the Olympic games help bring people from different nations together, while others claim that holding the Olympics wastes money which could be used for important issues.

In many countries, some people claim that the

Olympic

games

combine different nationalities together

whereas

some believe that holding the

Olympic

games

wastes quantities of money. Personally, both sides have their own opinions and I agree with the latter argument that

this

is merely wasting of funds. On the one hand, for some individuals, Holding the

Olympic

games

combine

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the same interested individuals from various countries and

bring

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peace to among nations in the world.

Furthermore

,

this

situation has been believed to not only allow participants and

athletics

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from other nations to communicate but

also

exchange their notions with each other,

as a result

, people gain an understanding of traditions and attitudes.

For instance

, gathering all athletes together in an enormous hall in order to have dinner together, successfully increased the relationship in the

Olympic

games

in various lands. Regarding some communities who

considered

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the affairs as wasting funds, There are several crucial reasons for

this

phenomenon, which

the

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suffering from primary demand, which consists of food, security and accommodations in poverty countries.

Consequently

, Authorities

threatens

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populations by investing a bunch of money in those events in order to participate in communities and strengthen the relationships with other nations.

For example

,

In

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the BBC

news

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, some poverty

counties

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countries

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spent

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50% of their income on affairs, leading to suffering from hunger, which is the primary demand, and poor facilities and increasing taxes in order to increase the country's

incomes

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. In conclusion,

while

the

Olympic

games

are prone to provide peace and fringe benefits to many people, others believe that investing in primary demand is more crucial

instead

of wasting funds on those events.