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A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems can this cause? How might these problems be reduced?

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Nowadays, urbanization in the cities is rising because more and more
people
 are moving to the
center
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 and it can open many ways for them to increase their career,
therefore
, they move to the city.
However
, it is
also
 important to know that the countryside is equally important in the system of
republic
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 and I will try to explain it in my essay.
Firstly
 of all, it can be problematic to the government if all
people
 in the republic move to the city because
oversupplying
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 population can destroy infrastructure and purity of state,
for instance
, the production may not be enough for population, factories just may not be able to produce the product for residents on time and it may cause problems with meals because there are too many
people
. The solution
of
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this
 problem is that we should make
countryside
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the countryside
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 more innovative because more
people
 are moving to the cities
for
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this
 reason, we should make all terms for
people
 who live there and it is important to pay attention to the villages. From a neutral field of view, plus
of
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moving to the
center
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 can rise up the level of perspectives in
increase
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 prospects across industries and global rankings
such
 as in education, industry and so on. But we should not forget about rural areas as industries which can develop suburb areas are
also
 important in our lives and in the system of
state
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. In conclusion, we should do everything to make
people
 feel comfortable in the countryside.
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