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Nowadays, it’s not only large companies that might be able to make movies. Digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Do you think that it’s a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is recently pointed out that a
film
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 company can not only produce
films
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 but
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 every individual can make
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 entertainment content by himself by using digital
technology
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. In my opinion,
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 trend is most disadvantaged because it can lead to widespread fraud information and an increased
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 of unemployed workers in the
film
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 industry, which may be a harmful influence on society as a whole,
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 it can bring the development of creative skills. One of the negative aspects is that enjoying digital
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 can encourage creators to spread daut information more easily because there is a
possibility
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 of no strict regulation for broadcasting their
films
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 today.
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, a
film
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 provided by companies normally are investigated by a public organization for advertisement.
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, a
film
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 made by an individual is streamed on an online platform is a high
possibility
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.
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,
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films
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 can highly include fake information which likely confuses
people
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. Another flaw is that there is a
possibility
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 for a
number
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 of
people
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 who engage in the movie industry to lose their works when their jobs are replaced with digital
technology
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, and
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 it can be recognized the lives of the
number
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 of
people
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 are likely influenced.
This
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 is because in general, making a
film
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 are created by an enormous
number
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 of
people
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 as actors, producers and photographers. Reducing their working opportunities can become one of the risks for an unencouraged economy due to their large working population.
On the other hand
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, as a beneficial side, it can be
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 said that taking digital
technology
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 can develop
people
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’s creative skills. Producing
films
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 by using
this
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 advanced tool possibly bring a chance for
people
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 to express their imagination. Due to the difficulty to find an opportunity to create artwork on daily basis normally, it can be recognized advantage for practising their creative skill. In conclusion, developing digital
technology
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 for making
films
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 is a mostly negative skill because it affects society as a whole is a high
possibility
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 despite a benefit for enhancing
people
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’s creativity.
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