More and more people no longer read the newspaper or watch TV programs to get news. They get news about the world through the Internet. Is this positive or negative development?

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In recent decades, reading a newspaper and watching

to being up to date on the latest

news

has been changed.

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These traditional ways are no longer the paramount way for individuals. I wholeheartedly believe that

this

is a positive effect. And in

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essay, I will explain the reasons. The principal reason for being effective in using the Internet

instead

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forms is that it is more convenient, user-friendly, and easy to find the title.

Because individuals

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have more

various

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options to choose their

news

category and read it every time and everywhere.

Thus

, people can read

news

with a

cellphone

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anywhere they want.

For example

, dwellers can read

news

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subways or

buses

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when they are going to work.

In addition

, using the Internet is a time-efficient method. Since individuals can search the topic and read it sooner and quicker, it is a time-saving method.

whereas

for watching the report on

, we have to wait for a defined time and perhaps we will miss it.

Therefore

, it is a feasible and ideal form of reading

news

For instance

, when there is lots of information about an economic crisis, we can just enter the keywords and

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get all the latest information about it.

Moreover

, the Internet is an

environmentally

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manner of getting the report and it has

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caused

to reduce

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pollution in recent years.

Due to

the fact that it does not need to cut the trees and produce paper and

then

throw it away, it is an eco-friendly form of receiving notifications.

Hence

, only in

this

way can we

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consume less paper and fossil fuels.

Consequently

, it helps to reduce the risk of global warming. To illustrate, there is no need to go out by car or turn on the

and consume oil and electricity for reading and watching the

news

. In conclusion,

although

for some folks it is upsetting that traditional

newspaper

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and watching

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going to

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fade, the contemporary method is more effective and humans will have experienced

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successful solution by a few years later. And in my view, it is

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- desirable by people all around the world.

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2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

364 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Topic Vocabulary:

Accessibility
Democratizes access to information
Real-time updates
Misinformation
Diverse range of sources
Multiple perspectives
Critical thinking
Reinforce biases
Information overload
Decline of traditional media
Innovation and adaptation
Interactive forms of news consumption
Engagement
Echo chambers
Unverified information

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