The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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In modern
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, different
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products have a big important role in
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's relationships, conversations and
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idea. I will give examples of possible causes and I will explain the advantages and disadvantages of
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situation.
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with, one of the main drawbacks that should be considered is not face-to-face contact between
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time
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when had physical contact and conversation was
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and live.
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training
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social skills,
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pleasure from our speech and our
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. Needless to say that social
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are very terrible for our organism - brain, eyes and different anatomic
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get much pressure from computers, telephones and other gadgets with social
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platforms,
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people
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waste a lot of time due to social
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considered,
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social
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, are conspicuous that should not be ignored.
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, apart from drawbacks, some benefits should be introduced.
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rapid world time is running out and
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must do their
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very quickly. And these
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be
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,
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should use conversation always, social
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are
great
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useful instrument for present
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, most of them can not do
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without
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and gadgets.
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, it becomes apparent there are numerous benefits behind each drawback that must be reflected on. In conclusion, I believe that the positive side of
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trend outweighs the negative sides
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because social
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very help our world
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for international connection, we can know a lot of events, many interesting
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about
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world.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • face-to-face interaction
  • geographical barriers
  • global community
  • cultural diversity
  • economic opportunities
  • superficial interactions
  • mental health impact
  • loneliness
  • depression
  • interpersonal relationships
  • real world
  • spread of misinformation
  • echo chambers
  • societal polarization
  • informed citizenship
  • constant connectivity
  • maintain relationships
  • fast and efficient
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