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Some people believe that visitor to other countries should follow local customs and behavior, others disagree and think that the host country welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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With growing the number of travelling globally, whether
tourists
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 should adapt to the new behaviour and appearance of that
country
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 or
host
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 should accept the differences of cultures has become more critical than ever.
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tourists
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 should hold the responsibility. On the one hand, there are several reasons why the
host
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 countries should compromise with the visitors. Since they may not be aware of their language and all appropriate traditions of that
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, they will not be able to communicate sufficiently and learn the right attitudes needed.
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, it seems more efficient for the destined
country
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 to show hospitality and respect the discrepancies.
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, for an American who travels to middle east countries will be so challenging to learn their
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 in
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, accepting diversities would bring many benefits to the
host
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. By doing so,
tourists
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 will discover a new
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, and people of that
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 will acquire new knowledge from the visitors'
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 or attitude.
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, despite the merits, it seems more effortless for the
host
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 to do so.
On the other hand
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, visitors need to follow the new rules for several causes. While in some traditions some behaviour is usual, in others are not. So it is better to obey the visiting place
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 as some behaviour might be against their law.
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, a none-Muslim travelling to Iran may face some difficulty if she doesn't wear a hijab due to religion.
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, it is more common sense that
tourists
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 follow the rules as there will be just a few of them compared to a
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's population. In my perspective, following the new place's
culture
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 would be more beneficial, manageable, and practical for the travellers. In conclusion, despite all the cultural and behavioural differences,
tourists
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 need to comply with them due to the primary reasons mentioned.
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