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Some of today’s schools insist that all students have their own laptop computer in class to assist in their education. Do you feel that this would be an advantage to students’ education, or would it be an unnecessary complication?

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Nowadays, technology becomes more improvement than before, so the need of using
the
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laptop
 or computer in school is more useful for the student. The schools must change the ways and tools of teaching methods. They should use a
laptop
 to be more effective and do not lose time when the tutor writes on board and
then
 the student repeat on paper. I feel these days people need to change the traditional ways of teaching , they have to find the best methods to teaching on
this
 huge change and development of technology. The use of a
laptop
 in school makes learning easier than using
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 book.
Moreover
,
this
 technique can introduce the students to the future world because
this
 world might be in the future with more and more technology and everything will play and work automatically. So the schools have to make a vision of future and encourage to use a
laptop
 on school. Another point,
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