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Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this good thing or a bad thing?

#people #clothes #case
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social media is becoming
essential
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 part of
the
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people
’s life. Day after day it is growing more to reach everyone on earth. Getting stuck with it
,
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is
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it
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 affects various aspects of
people
’s lifestyles. One of them is the way to dress up. Dressing up in
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 way or another reflects
people
’s identity.
However
, following
fashion
 trends is it good or bad?
Clothes
 act as a mirror that reflects the sense of
people
. Arranging, buying ,assorting and wearing
clothes
 reflects one’s identity.
However
, by the thrive of
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social
medial
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this
 is no more true for all cases. Some
of
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the
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people
 look up to celebrities’
clothe
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 as a
fashion
 that should be mimicked to stay updated. Others blindly wear seasonal
fashion
 trends regardless
if
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of
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 it suits them or not. I have friends
for example
 who wear
clothes
 that doesn’t
fits
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 them correctly believing that since it is a trend they must follow regardless of their body shapes and their skin
color
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.
On the other
hand
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 some
people
 choose wisely which
clothes
 to wear and
in
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at
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 the same time are fashionable and trendy. Wearing
elegant
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an elegant
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 fashionable outfit that suits
people
it
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is a plus. Being
fashionable
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a fashionable
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 person is mandatory to fit in
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society. Nowadays
fashion
 consultants are present to help
people
 wear suitable outfits that could combine
fashion
 and
person’s
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a person’s
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 own taste.
As a
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 sum up, following
fashion
 is not a shame but it should be accompanied by different steps. Which are choosing wisely what is suitable to dress as well asking professional consultants if needed for help
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