These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays,
people
tend to live in a
place
where it is not their hometown. Many
people
migrate to new places, like cities even other countries, and leave the
place
where they come from. It may
as a result
of financial and occupation demand or even they want to live in a new circumstance. In my opinion,
this
type of development can bring negative and positive impacts on society.
However
, for me, it will be more advantages than disadvantages.
Therefore
, in
this
essay, I will describe my opinion from both perspectives, especially the weaknesses of
this
development.
To begin
with, the benefit of migration is
fulfillment
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in financial support and better carrier, as the value in our society the better job and the more money we have, the more wealth we are.
People
often move to the
city
to get a better job and gain more money. It is not only a distance movement but
also
a social movement. By moving to a better
place
, they can
also
change their life's fortune.
For instance
, my parents are migrants. They move from one
village
to the capital
city
of the province where I am living now. In the beginning, they went to the
city
for getting a better education. Yet,
finally
, they got a better carrier in the
city
.
Thus
, they decided to move away from their hometown.
On the other hand
, the disadvantaged are types of jobs in their origin
place
will disappear.
For example
, as I mentioned before about my parents, the fact that a lot of my parent's friends from the same
village
also
moved from that
village
.
As a result
, the
village
looks so quiet, and there is only a handful of
people
living there. Yet, the most tragic is that most of the fertile soil there is not used again since lack of farmers there. To conclude, moving to other places and leaving the origin
place
, can be advantage and disadvantage. Yet, from my perspective,
this
development will be more destructive than constructive if there is no decisive regulation to control the movement of
people
.

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  • metropolitan
  • migration
  • globalization
  • socio-economic factors
  • traditional norms
  • cosmopolitan environment
  • brain drain
  • assimilation
  • gentrification
  • alienation
  • multiculturalism
  • infrastructure strain
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