Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Commercial or advertising is a key
point
in
product
marketing. Many
products
rely on
these commercial and advertising program
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this commercial and advertising program
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so
it
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they
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can be bought by the consumers. Some
issues
about advertising and commercial of a
product
are about its ethical concern and acceptability among the
society
.
This
essay will explore
this
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these
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unethical
issues
in
advertisement
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an advertisement
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from two
point
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points
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of view: from the producer or
company
who issued the
advertisement
and from the
society
.
First
, from the
point
of view of the
company
, unethical
advertisement
means a backfire for their
products
. When
society
see
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the
advertisement
and notice the unethical method, they will correlate
this
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these
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“unethical things” with the
products
. Some
society
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societies
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even
tend
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tends
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to make it serious. South Korean people was known as one of the most critical
society
especially
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,especially
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about movies, film and entertainment industry, including
advertisement
and commercials. They have
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a “cancel
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culture” and will boycott a
product
who
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that
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correlate with unethical
issues
. The
issues
could be from the methods, the actors or
actress
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actresses
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or even from the
company
.
Thus
, in some
society
, if the
company
choose to advertise their
products
in
unethical
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an unethical
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way, it will ruin the
product
itself.
Second
, from the
point
of view of
the
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society
, unethical advertising means
normalize
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unethical
behavior
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behaviour
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. Nowadays, advertising and any commercial could be seen in any kind of
place
, from the mainstream media, like television, internet, billboards up to a
place
that we never knew could be
ads
place
, like
in
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a park bench or under the swimming pool.
This
range of
place
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places
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means that almost everyone could see the
ads
. Unfortunately, differ from movies and films
who
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has their own regulation about age restriction, there
are
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is
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almost no restriction to watch
the
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apply
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advertisement
. If a young generation of the
society
seeing
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sees
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this unethical
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this unethical ad
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ads
, she or he will think that
its
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it is
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okey
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okay
to do the same. Like an old proverb
say
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, Children see and Children Do. When they see
a violent
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violent ads
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ads
,
for example
, it will make them think that it is
okey
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okay
to hit or did violent things to others.
Thus
, from the explanation above, it is clear that unethical and unacceptable
ads
will give more harm than the advantages for the
products
and for the
society
. For the companies, as
this
unethical way to sell their
products
could
effects
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effect
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their
products
, it is necessary for them to make sure their
advertisement
will
accepted
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be accepted
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by
the
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apply
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society
. The government
also
need to make clear regulation about ethics in
advertising
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the advertising
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and entertainment industry so no one will get any harm in the future.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unethical
  • Unacceptable
  • Deceptive
  • Exaggerated
  • Misleading
  • Manipulation
  • Vulnerable
  • Targeted advertising
  • Perpetuation
  • Societal norms
  • Stereotypes
  • Negative body image
  • Intrusion of privacy
  • Data-driven
  • Over-saturation
  • Desensitization
  • Annoyance
  • Greenwashing
  • Eco-conscious
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