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It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people than young people in many countries in the near future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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In recent times, it has been widely claimed that the population is expected that there will be a large proportion of elderly
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 than adolescents in a majority of countries around the world in the
next
 time. In my opinion, I certainly believe that it is a huge drawback of development as individuals may lead to extinction and have ancient concepts. Undoubtedly, the primary reason why I think it is a bad result is that if there are retired society more than teenagers,
this
 would cause too outdated tradition in terms of perception in everything
such
 as consuming food and behaviour. A good example can be seen in Thailand which is my country
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 older public will want their children to eat meals with each other or together and
also
 teach some excellent actions to affect to themselves when they make many new friends or join with new communities.
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,
this
 will lack contemporary concepts and progression in every kind of situation if young children are
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too small a proportion of
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nature.
Moreover
, extinct of human species is another reason why I trust in view of negative perspective as when the elderly individuals are the most population over the earth, it means that humans are close to the death, so
this
 will be the most a dangerously huge thing that must not happen in the world.
Although
 young folk can seek many opportunities from their number of the population
such
 as for
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 work and enrolling on new many workplaces,
this
 is not the story that should be reverent In conclusion, based on the reasons mentioned above, I strongly think that if
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retired crowd are more than teenagers, it will exactly cause devastation as nations can be extinct. The lack of modern concepts
also
 is a bad thing.
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