There are social, medical, and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones?

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Modern technology significantly improved human life. It is often believed that using mobile
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can cause medical and technical problems.
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trend brings a lot of disadvantages rather than positive effects.I am going to elaborate on some drawbacks with some relevant reasons.
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with,In
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era, mobile
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have become a part of human life.By using mobile
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we can call anyone around the world.We can share our pictures with anyone who is living abroad
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.We can use cell
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for entertainment.
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watching movies,playing games,shopping etc.They are increasing social connectivity between the
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.
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, we cannot undermine the disadvantages over the advantages.
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,Using a mobile phone for a long time will affect our brains.Due to the
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our skin will be damaged and memory will be declined steadily.
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,Oxford university proved that pregnant ladies shouldn't use mobile
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for more time it may cause health issues for the fetus.
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, there are technical problems associated with mobile
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as using the mobile
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while charging will burst it may kill humans.
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, it is quite noticeable that MI
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have blasted so many times if
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are using
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while charging.In another ,instance some
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have been blasted in the human pockets where no one has an idea about
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issue.
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do shopping and transactions using mobile
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they need to enter their personal details and credit/debit card details by using
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hackers will transfer our amount it will be a bigger loss to us.There are many secret apps that will be installed on our
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without knowing us by clicking some links.
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,
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are now busy using the apps like Facebook,Instagram or Snapchat the communication with physically available
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is reduced. Due to
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people
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are having lack of communication. To conclude, the drawbacks have outweighed the benefits of using mobile
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. So, by reducing the usage of mobile
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humans can safely live around the world.
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