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Opinion divide concerning what plays a more important role in people's personality development, nature or nurture. What is your opinion?

#role #people #personality #development #nature
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personal
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dedicate
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 life for, while some believe that genetic factors are key, others see it
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 more of an acquired skill. In my opinion
personality
development
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 as we nurture our mind with
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knowledge
. We can
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 see how pe
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, I see that
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with
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 of modern science and
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psychology
, we have many tools that can develop our personalities, in
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different
 aspects,
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problem solving
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 skills, communication skills, and emotional
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intelligence
.
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 during my career as a sales manager, I attended several seminars that aid in
personality
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development
,
such
 as team managing,
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 skills, and others.
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 class has helped me develop my
personality
further
.
Second
,
personality
development
 becomes very
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evident
 when we look at children
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growing
 up, and how we as adults
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guide
 and
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 their
development
. As a father of two
kids
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,kids
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 I have witnessed how their
personality
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personalities
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 is developing as they become more independent as they a growing, as kids face daily
challanges
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challenges
, adults help them to solve these issues,
eventually
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 kids learn how to solve these issues by them selfs,
this
 a prove how
personality
development
 is not nature but nurture.
Lastly
, I would say science and education along with parental guidance, is what sets
personality
development
.
This
 idea that
development
 is acquired should inspire
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everyone
 of us to always work on his
personality
development
, as well as guiding his children, family and the loved ones to
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further
 develop their
personailties
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personalities
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