In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

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manner.

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research done in Ghana, their crime rates had reduced by 47% after introducing vocational training as a school subject. Due to that,

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be decreased. To conclude, due to the lesser relationship with the religious places and the

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are the major factors related to the growth of the mal-functions.

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vocational programs to the college syllabus are the preventive actions regarding

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