Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research ,business and the academic world. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
People have different views about sharing scientific,business and academic
information
.some believe it is better to share all possible information
while others believe valuable and important information
should not establish for free. In my point of view ,it is better not to share important information
freely.
On the one hand ,sharing all kinds of information
can have some advantages for pupils . firstly
if all people have access to research
freely the tendency to study will increase and it helps to enhance public knowledge. secondly
open-access Add a comma
,secondly
research
let talented individuals who cannot afford the cost of research
, use free information
and have a chance to present their potential intelligence.
On the other hand
,in some others’ view information
should not be published freely .firstly
scientists and researchers cost time and money
to do their studies
so it needs to those costs be compensated. By paying money
for research
,the owners will be able to afford the expenses of continuing and developing those unfinished fields of study.In this
case, I remember one of my friends who was a bookworm and intelligent at university had to leave his studies
because the cost of experiments was high and he could not meet his daily basic needs.Finally
, paying money
for studies
can be seen as motivation and perks for scientists and writers to expand their studies
in the new objects and issues.
In conclusion ,although
both views have some advantages, I believe we should support scientists and researchers by spending money
on their worthwhile knowledge.Submitted by qalehqafi on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite