You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, •give details of your course and your arrival/departure date •explain your accommodation needs •ask for information about getting to and from the college

#course #college #accommodation #officer #•give #departure #date #•explain #•ask #information

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

epistle to obtain some information regarding accommodation

while

studying at your

college

. Let me put forth my affairs. Actually, I am enrolled in a full-time Laboratory Technician program in your

college

. The duration of the course is only 6 months. Classes begin on 6 June 2024 so, I will be arriving on 2 June 2024.

Moreover

, I am visiting

this

college

for the first time. I live in Calgary, Alberta which is far from Brampton. Owing to

this

I will be flying to reach my destination. Even though I have few friends and cousins living down in Brampton, I would love my personal space for my studies. A one-bedroom apartment with a personal kitchen and bathroom will be great. I would prefer a place near grocery stores, restaurants and all other amenities.

Although

, it is an extra affair for you,

however

, it would be kind of you if I could get some information regarding transportation for daily travel to

college

. Some more information

such

as bus maps, ride-sharing or subway maps will

also

be useful. I would really appreciate your support in

this

matter. Looking forward to a prompt reply. Yours faithfully, John

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task response

Your letter is clear and well structured, covering all the required points. However, ensure that you use varied sentence structure to enhance readability and engagement.

coherence cohesion

While your paragraphs are mostly organized around single ideas, make sure that each paragraph contains only one main point to ensure clarity.

task response

You have clearly stated the purpose of your letter and organized the information logically.

coherence cohesion

Your greeting and closing are appropriate and polite, which is suitable for formal letters.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

199 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

accommodation officer
short course
training college
abroad
arrival date
departure date
private room
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