You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, •give details of your course and your arrival/departure date •explain your accommodation needs •ask for information about getting to and from the college
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
epistle to obtain some information regarding accommodation while
studying at your college
.
Let me put forth my affairs. Actually, I am enrolled in a full-time Laboratory Technician program in your college
. The duration of the course is only 6 months. Classes begin on 6 June 2024 so, I will be arriving on 2 June 2024. Moreover
, I am visiting this
college
for the first time. I live in Calgary, Alberta which is far from Brampton. Owing to this
I will be flying to reach my destination.
Even though I have few friends and cousins living down in Brampton, I would love my personal space for my studies. A one-bedroom apartment with a personal kitchen and bathroom will be great. I would prefer a place near grocery stores, restaurants and all other amenities.
Although
, it is an extra affair for you, however
, it would be kind of you if I could get some information regarding transportation for daily travel to college
. Some more information such
as bus maps, ride-sharing or subway maps will also
be useful. I would really appreciate your support in this
matter.
Looking forward to a prompt reply.
Yours faithfully,
JohnSubmitted by jaspreet on
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task response
Your letter is clear and well structured, covering all the required points. However, ensure that you use varied sentence structure to enhance readability and engagement.
coherence cohesion
While your paragraphs are mostly organized around single ideas, make sure that each paragraph contains only one main point to ensure clarity.
task response
You have clearly stated the purpose of your letter and organized the information logically.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are appropriate and polite, which is suitable for formal letters.
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