Mrs. Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. write a letter to Mrs. barrettes your letter suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, Hope you and your family doing amazing, I am writing

this

letter with your advertisement for helping you in your house

summer. I saw the news in the newspaper. there are many different ways that I can help you .

firstly

, I was good at cooking ,so I can prepare your lunch and dinner.

Besides

that , I have good experience in gardening that I can help you to wear your plant every day and weeding. the reason I apply for

this

job is that I was applying for my course study at Sunway college in Kuala Lumpur the capital of Malaysia, and mainly to earn my college fees .

Besides

, I was having a long summer holiday for about two months so I decided to find a job to reduce the financial problem of my family and earn some experience.

although

I will be free for all two months, I have to leave early on Monday evening as I was having a piano class every Monday night. I would be very appreciative if you give me

this

opportunity to be your helper. please feel free to contact me if you need any additional information.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

197 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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