Some people think that current environmental issues are global problems and should therefore be dealt with by the government. Others think that these problems can only be dealt with by individuals. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, due to globalization and industry
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the population has been increasing
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past
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10 years. Some masses think, that the
government
should deal with global problems like current environmental issues.
However
, others think, that these problems can only be dealt with by individuals. In my opinion, I partially agree with both
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views.
this
essay will discuss both sides of
argument
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the argument
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in detail.
Firstly
, the
government
should take
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initiative
to clear the wastage dumped in the water bodies like
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seas
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and
river`s
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rivers
river
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. They need to encourage communities to
use
paper bags and organic materials to reduce the
pollution
caused by plastic and other harmful materials.
For example
, the
government
should make
an
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awareness
programes
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programmes
programs
around the city or town to encourage
use
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the use
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of organic materials to reduce
pollution
caused by plastic. According to me,
this
method can be very useful.
Secondly
, the higher authorities should implement new rules on the people who damage the environment by spreading
pollution
.
For instance
, In New
Delhi
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the ruling party introduced the odd-even day to
use
a vehicle. In
this
scheme public only
use
odd-numbered vehicles on Monday, Tuesday and Wednesday whereas, even-numbered vehicles on other days.
On the other hand
, the
polution
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pollution
can
reduced
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by
usage
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of the transportation system by individuals and it
also
save
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fossil fuels. Due to the high usage of fossil
fuels
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ozone layer is damaging.
For example
, a group of people attend their
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from one place by the same mode of transportation
that is
of a bus or a car,
then
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usage of fossil fuels can be reduced. In conclusion, saving our environment is not only the
government
's responsibility, It is everyone's responsibility to save the environment. In my opinion, the methods used by the
government
helps to reduce
pollution
in
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effective way.
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