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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of oldre people. do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

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It has often been argued that
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 in the status quo in a myriad of societies, the population of adolescents are increasing gradually in comparison to people who are known ageing.
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 and drawbacks of overpopulation in adolescents in
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. One justification often given for
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 of younger generations is that
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 of individuals may assert that, the greatest wealth, strength and hope of any nation is its youth. If we want to ensure a bright future for our
country
, we
first
 need to strengthen and empower our youth. There is no denying the fact that, the youth is the chief hope of its motherland. When they enter society all they want to do is to bring some impressive accomplishments for their
country
.
This
 may engender a
country
 to make strides not only in terms of economy but
also
 in other terms.
On the other hand
, if younger generations contain a myriad of inhabitants in a community, it will tend to high unemployment and job dissatisfaction. Nowadays, It is job satisfaction
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 matters the most to younger people. When teenagers find their careers boring, under no circumstances are adolescents eager to work. Recent research substantiated that,
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 when there is no interest behind it, you are not able to make any progress. Taking everything into consideration, I strongly believe that the merits of overpopulation in the younger generation outweigh its drawbacks which let the
country
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go beyond the limitations in many terms due to the fact that these people are the hope of their motherland.
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