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In some countries, more and more adults are living with their parents after graduating from college, university or even after finding a job. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

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In some Asia countries, living with
parents
 after graduating from college, the university is ubiquitous in these areas.
People
 might have to choose their type of living for their own reasons,
however
, I believe that the disadvantages of living together with
parents
 can surpass its benefits. It is hard to be negated the various merits bring when
people
 live with their
parents
. The positive aspect might be a more connected closing-knit relationship between
parents
 and their offspring.
This
 is because the closer
people
 live together, the better they understand and sympathize easily with each other. If the challenges take place which triggers
people
 to fall into immense stuck, their
parents
 may always there willing to share as well as additional incentive them to come over these obstacles. Another financial view can be considered that adults
people
 do not need to so much worry about earning money if they live together with their
parents
.
For example
, unless their offspring have found a job yet, Vietnamese
parents
 still may fain to care for them. Despite these arguments, I firmly assume that on the private level,
people
 are limited personal space when living with their
parents
. Adults might need more privacy to do things which they want without being bothered or complained about
such
 as celebrating parties, going out late at night when living apart from their
parents
.
Besides
, manifestly, when living with
parents
,
people
 have the propensity for depending on their
parents
 more than living alone. They may be easily parasitic to their
parents
 and
as a result
, the unemployment rate increase considerably.
This
 not only becomes the burden of society but
also
 leads to society's vices. In conclusion, with the above reasons, I believe that we lose more than we gain when living with
parents
 after
people
 up to mature age.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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