While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Certain
amount of individuals Add an article
A certain
believe
that Change the verb form
believes
most
crucial atmospheric problem is global warming while others Correct article usage
the most
considers
Change the verb form
consider
about
the destruction of world wild resources. Both global warming and Change preposition
apply
deforestation
have negative
impact on the world. Add an article
a negative
This
essay will discuss both points and will give my opinion.
To commence on, global warming is one of the major problem
addressed by the environment. Some of the major reasons Fix the agreement mistake
problems
of
Change preposition
for
this
condition is
Change the verb form
are
destruction
of forest and industrialization. Due to industrialization, air Add an article
the destruction
get
contaminated and there is not much greenery for reversing Change the verb form
gets
this
condition. Global warming and deforestation
are directly proportional factors. All these things resulted in increase
in atmospheric temperature which eventually make Add an article
an increase
melting
of ice Correct article usage
the melting
at
Polar Regions. Change preposition
in
For instance
, recent articles says
Change the verb form
say
water
level in the sea is getting high due to Add an article
the water
melting
of ice near the poles. Global warming is not a myth it’s a fact.
Correct article usage
the melting
However
, to address
Change the verb form
addressing
this
problem is important now. Industrialisation play
a key role in the quality of our life so we cannot stop developments. But we can reduce Change the verb form
plays
deforestation
. Firstly
government should take necessary
Add an article
the necessary
step
to create Fix the agreement mistake
steps
small
Add an article
a small
forest
in the middle of cities. Fix the agreement mistake
forests
For example
, Singapore authorities develop a forest in the middle of the town for jungle safari. Same
technology we can adopt to make wild greenery. Add an article
The same
Secondly
take necessary steps to control air Add a comma
,Secondly
pollutions
. Because scientific studies reported that increased air pollution is one of the Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
reason
for Change to a plural noun
reasons
ozone
layer hole.
To conclude, preserving our earth is our responsibility. In order to save our Correct article usage
the ozone
planet
we have Add a comma
,planet
Fix the infinitive
to reduce
reduce
Change the verb form
reduced
deforestation
and take necessary
steps to decrease atmospheric temperature. According to Correct article usage
the necessary
me
global warming and Correct pronoun usage
my
deforestation
are two
Add a hyphen
two-person
person
in the same boat. Both are hazardous for our planet so immediate action is needed for Change to a plural noun
people
this
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
