Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. What the possible causes of this trend, and what solutions would be effective reducing crime.

Crime

Use synonyms

seems to be increasing in some countries around the world, particularly

teenagers

Change preposition

among teenagers

show examples

and young adults. The causes of

this

Linking Words

appears

Change the verb form

appear

show examples

to be focused on 2 origins and the number of solution

also

Linking Words

appear

Change the verb form

appears

show examples

to be possible. Perhaps the main issue is related to moral

emotion

Use synonyms

and we need to give to the teaching of morals in childhood. There is a huge link between moral

emotion

Use synonyms

and

crime

Use synonyms

. Some research shows that adolescents are more likely to carry out violent acts if they need weak empathy, shame and guilt. There was a simple example

occurred

Correct pronoun usage

that occurred

show examples

in my country a few days ago. A girl spilt hot coffee on the head of another girl who does not know. It shows us that her moral emotional was poor and her self-control was

lack

Wrong verb form

lacking

show examples

. Now she is immediately

labeled

Change the spelling

labelled

show examples

as “bad” in social media. Another cause is too much screen

time

Use synonyms

. They spend their free

time

Use synonyms

using social media and playing video games and some of them

got

Wrong verb form

get

show examples

addicted

it

Change preposition

to it

show examples

. Many of them feature unbelievable

life style

Correct your spelling

lifestyle

show examples

, bad

habit

Fix the agreement mistake

habits

show examples

, aggressive characters and

crime

Use synonyms

. It might lead children to believe

such

Linking Words

behavior

Change the spelling

behaviour

show examples

is normal or even desirable. Turning to possible solutions, parents should spend

time

Use synonyms

with that

teach

Wrong verb form

teaching

show examples

them morals and

Correct article usage

the

show examples

education system should develop moral development programs. If we did

this

Linking Words

step, children would learn how to control their

Use synonyms

emotion

Fix the agreement mistake

emotions

show examples

and they would not commit

Use synonyms

crime

Fix the agreement mistake

crimes

show examples

.

Linking Words

Also

Add a comma

Also,

show examples

we should provide a good living environment

which is supporting

Wrong verb form

that supports

show examples

their interest and

connecting

Wrong verb form

connects

show examples

others.

Also

Linking Words

Add a comma

,

show examples

teenagers should find

hobby

Add an article

a hobby

show examples

which is helpful

spending

Change preposition

in spending

show examples

their leisure

time

Use synonyms

.

To sum up

Linking Words

,

this

Linking Words

is a problem that

connected

Add a missing verb

is connected

show examples

to moral

emotion

Use synonyms

and spending their free

time

Use synonyms

and

solution

Add an article

the solution

a solution

show examples

will require parents,

education

Correct article usage

the education

show examples

system and

individual

Fix the agreement mistake

individuals

show examples

.