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in the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

#future #nobody #newspapers #books
The advance in
technology
 may develop due to various inventions. So, people mostly embrace
technology
 due to its various merits.
As a result
 ,the community may not interact with either printed
newspapers
 or
books
 in future.
although
 there have numerous reasons for
this
, I claim that
this
 sentiment is partially warranted because
technology
 may be easy access for all regardless of age.
In contrast
,
Newspapers
 or
books
 may waste valuable times In contemporary society, a community may thoroughly interact with the
technology
 because it may embrace the whole society due to different reasons.
furthermore
,There is the most compelling evidence to prove that the advance of
technology
 may inculcate easy access for all regardless of the ability to pay which may as potential benefits including, being able to look at any advertisement, selling something or for awareness of something. As an illustration,
technology
 may
benefits
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us to do anything withing finger touch it is easier to use
this
 that of using newspaper.
In contrast
, using newspaper paper may hinder to mingle who come from poor-socio economic background family which may defeat to interact with who has a language barrier.
In addition
, hard copy base may be easy to access for all irrespective of their backgrounds. Which is the most preponderant viable way to eradicate social disorder and which may balance social equality all around the world.
For example
, senior citizens mostly mingle with the
newspapers
 and
books
 because of the absence of knowledge to use
technology
 so
technology
 will be no replaced as an invention sector among them in the future. In conclusion, reading
books
 or
newspapers
 has various merits as well as using
technology
. So, both are the most common way to provide news and an advertisement in present as well as in the future. It may really aid to imbalance social equality,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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