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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters ( such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decision about matter that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Some people argue that letting
children
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be independent on daily routine issues is likely for them to be
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 in society. Others argue about
importance
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 of selected issues
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 are more effective in their life. I myself, believe
children
 have right to think and make their own
decicion
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decision
decisions
 freely. On the one hand, some people believe
children
 have to pay more attention
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 the matters that have
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 impact
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 their life. It means that
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 they need to focus on important issues to increase
possibility
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 of being successful in
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feature
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. Take talented schools as the most patently obvious example, they are responsible not only
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 finding special talent in
children
, but
also
 extend their different abilities which lead to great achievements. They believe
children
 have to focus on specific matters
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 if they want to be successful.
On the other hand
, others accept the belief in
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the ideology
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 of freedom in various aspects, because having
wide
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 view about their selection may lead to
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the existence
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 of
individual
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individuals
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 who only dream about their wishes.
Therefore
, they set
children
 free to follow their dreams.
For example
, letting them
to
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choose food based on their preference, or about their priority when it comes to entertainment. It is useful for them in real life because they can learn they
are grow
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 up enough to make their own decisions, and it may increase their
self confidence
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. In conclusion,
although
 some people believe they need to prioritize many choices
thet
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that
they
 have been made by
children
, I personally believe in freedom of choice
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 different occasions.
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