Both government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices would help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The
government
is its duty to make sure that its citizens had adequate transport
facilities.But as far as I'm concerned, the government
alone can't help by investing in the public transport
system and lowering its transport
ticket costs to overwhelm the pollution caused by transport
. In ,my essay I'm going to look at why I oppose that statement.
To begin
with, the population in our country is increasing daily and a lot of people in the country would mean that the transport
means must also
increase. In that ,way I would say our government
is failing to meet the target. You would find that introducing only 50 zupco buses for the whole nation is not adequate enough. For an instance, if you visit our ranks in the CBD you can find a lot of people in huge queues waiting for one bus which can take them home. There is no way that the government
can meet the needs of the growing population. The only way to tackle the transport
pollution is too late private buses and combies
intervene.
In conclusion, the Correct your spelling
combines
government
should late the private buses and combies
pilot so that they will be able to overcome the Correct your spelling
combines
transport
pollution outrage.Submitted by tfungwe on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite