Computers are becoming an essential part of education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In

this

modern scenario,everyone tends to

use

laptops for various purposes like for project works and occupations,so these are playing an indispensable role in

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education field.I strongly agree with

this

statement.

this

essay will go into better detail with my subject view. To embark on,these days,schools are considered to be computer skills are very imperative for scholars at an early stage of their life.if institutions

start

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learn

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learning

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skills of laptops for individuals who are studying in that institution.

Consequently

,they will become

expert

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experts

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in the subject of

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the computer

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computer

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computers

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automatically it might be assisted after completing their graduation,they can

be easily get

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a job.

For instance

,

now days

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,many works are related to software fields where individuals have to work with systems,

thus

studying

this

skill may be beneficial for multitudes.

Moreover

,not only

it

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has

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educational benefits but

also

use

in

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the entertainment purpose like watching

Movies

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with friends as well as listening to music. On another hand,

although

this

phenomenon has a profound positive influence on the public,there are

also

some negative impacts on

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society in terms of spending quality time with them consistently rather than

communicate

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with family members.

As a result

,it leads to

spoil

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relationships among the people

also

some diseases can be occurred

such

as vision

problem

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problems

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and obesity.

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,

by

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sitting at one desk continuously

instead

of going out,

then

it will result in gaining weight.

Additionally

,another benefit of learning the art of using

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a laptop

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laptop

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laptops

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is we can

also

use

at

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them at

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shopping malls.

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,these days,big shopping mall centres

use

this

technology in terms of receiving bills from consumers. To conclude,computers have become popular among

the

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people in terms of job and educational purposes.

Furthermore

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it has

also

some negative impacts

such

as health issues as well as communication problems even though I accord with

this

statement.