Movies and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have a negative effect on society and should be censored. Others say they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The
entertainment
industry has pumped out many famous products and franchises, most of which are “violent content” rated. Some people
argue that the bloor
-and-gore Correct your spelling
blood
contents
on the market could have a bad effect on mental health and shouldn’t be displayed, while others think that it is normal and enjoyable. While action
movies
and games
do display violent contents
, I believe these creative products are for Fix the agreement mistake
content
entertainment
purposes and could help Add an article
the consumer
a consumer
consumer
to have a good time.
There is a belief Fix the agreement mistake
consumers
hold
by a number of Wrong verb form
held
people
that popular movies
and video
games
with violent contents
are giving out negative effects on the mental and social health of the consumers. There are many famous Fix the agreement mistake
content
action
/horror movie titles such
as Wrong Turn, The Cabin Fever, Zombieland. These contents
are publicly distributed and the gruesome scenes could reach out to many audiences. This
kind of entertainment
industry that profits from violent contents
could have a bad consequence on society because Fix the agreement mistake
content
people
who bought this
would think to themselves that violent
is normal. A friend of mine is a gang member and he told me he got his motivation to join from watching Replace the word
violence
movies
about cocain
mafia Correct your spelling
cocaine
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gangster-like
gangster
like Tony Montana.
On other hand, some Fix the agreement mistake
gangsters
people
argue that movies
and games
containing violence are there for entertainment
purposes mostly. The violence itself is the reminder of what could happen have we acted uncivilized. We are exposed to the gruesome parts and see it for what it is so we don’t ask to seek it in our real life. Take some well-known video
games
for example
- Battlefield, Left 4 Dead, Counter Strike
- these Add a hyphen
Counter-Strike
action
/shooting games
are here for us to releast
our anger and stress and it has been working well for many decades. Correct your spelling
release
Me
and my friends Change the pronoun
I
all
play Correct pronoun usage
I all
games
, we shoot in
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apply
video
games
but we never need to own guns in real life. We don’t have a need for guns because video
games
is
enough to satisfy us in Change the verb form
are
this
regard. Not forget to mention that every movies
and Fix the agreement mistake
movie
games
in the market right now are Change to a singular noun
game
labeled
, viewers are warned and they have the option to not proceed Change the spelling
labelled
further
with the content.
In conclusion, a lot of the famous movies
and video
games
are adult rated
. Some Add a hyphen
adult-rated
people
see these violent contents
as
bad for Correct your spelling
is
the
society and Correct article usage
apply
calling
for censorship, while others see Wrong verb form
call
action
and horror movie/game titles as a way to escape reality, to be entertained in a different world. I think that it is harmless as it is mainly used to ease stress
from our mind and provide us with an Add an article
the stress
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