The environment is changing rapidly because humans are destroying nature to meet their needs. Discuss this cause of environmental change and suggest some solutions for this problem
In
this
modern scenario,many individuals have become self-centered
just for their desires,Change the spelling
self-centred
therefore
they are the only reasons for demolishing our habitat,so they Add a missing verb
are use
use
to Wrong verb form
used
cutting
down an array of Change the form of the verb
cut
tress
for Correct your spelling
trees
constucting
new houses and factories.Correct your spelling
constructing
As a result
,our surroundings are fluctuating greatly because of humans behaviour.this
essay will discuss both sources of this
issue as well as put forward measures to reduce this
problem
.
To embark on,the main reason of
Change preposition
for
this
problem
is overpopulation,thus
people
are
Change the verb form
are used
are using
use
to spoil
nature in terms of trimming trees which are replaced with homes.Wrong verb form
spoiling
As a result
,oxygen
Add an article
the oxygen
level
may be Fix the agreement mistake
levels
decreases
as plants ensure more oxygen for humans,Wrong verb form
decrease
then
increasing of carbon dioxide into the atomsphere
which is very dangerous for Correct your spelling
atmosphere
people
's health.For instance
,according to the world health organisation,many people
are struggling with breathing problems due to the lack of oxygen levels.Moreover
,this
changes can Correct determiner usage
these
also
create pollution because nowadays factories are established within the city rather than the countryside.Consequently
,noise as well as sound contamination
might be increased.
On another hand,there are Add the comma(s)
, as well as sound contamination,
also
some remedial measures that can be taken to solve this
problem
.Firstly
,people
should be encouraged to the importance of nature,so authorities should take a few steps to encourage them like putting a campaign for them in which they have to teach them the uses of tress
.Correct your spelling
trees
Secondly
,the government should take a penalty from the public who are use
to Change the form of the verb
used
destroy
nature,so In Wrong verb form
destroying
this
way,we can reduce the problem
.For example
,in countries like the USA,this
rule has already implemented
,so in that country,Add a missing verb
been implemented
people
do not use
to remove tress.
To conclude,everyone has the privilege to protect the environment,therefore
inviduals
try to plant one tree Correct your spelling
individuals
instead
of cutting down them.In this
way
we can reduce the problems.Add a comma
,way
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