A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday. Describe some possible advantages. Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Megan, I hear that you're planning a camping holiday

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summer. I think you will really enjoy the experience, most especially breathing in the great outdoors, and be one with nature.

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, there are some things that you need to know before going on the trip. Be aware of camping farther out in the woods as it might be a bit dangerous as some bears are eager to wander around at night hunting for food. It's better to camp near the park entrances or somewhere where a forest ranger station is nearby.

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, since you're camping outside expect to get bit by mosquitos, So I suggest that you bring at least 2 mosquito repellents and a mosquito net. To fend off those pesky mosquitos ruining your sleep. Luckily I'm free on the holiday and I don't have anything much planned, and if you are interested, I can accompany you and I think it's more enjoyable to have someone with some experience in helping you with your

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time camping. I know you're gonna have a good time and it'll be a memorable experience for you. Your Friend, Jason Andrews

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

190 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

adventure
serenity
outdoors
refreshing
hustle and bustle
inherent
foster
distractions
cost-effective
unpredictable
wildlife
adequate preparation
physical demands
researching
campsite
lasting memories
mutual interests

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