The government has announced that it plans to build a new university. Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establish a new university in your community. Use specific details in your discussion.
Few people consider that building a new college from authorities in their living area will bring some negative impact while others disagree about that. Related to
this
argument, there are several benefits and drawbacks which I will explain in this
essay.
On the one hand, living near
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nearby
by
the Change preposition
apply
university
may have some disadvantages for the residents. Firstly
, once students all moved to the area which nearby their school, it will result in traffic
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a traffic
jam
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jams
in
the rush hour. As result, people need to get up more early to take public transportation commute to work, they may have less energy to be concentrate on their work. Change preposition
during
In addition
, it is harder for the city concuil
to manage the trash in the community if the popularity gradually increase. Correct your spelling
council
For instance
, university
will recure new students every year but it means that Add an article
the university
city
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the city
concuil
need to announce the rules of recycling and the Correct your spelling
council
acurate
way to throw trash annual year. Correct your spelling
accurate
Consequently
, we counld
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could
guartenee
that our Correct your spelling
guarantee
neighborhood
would keep clean as usual.
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neighbourhood
On the other hand
, establish
a new college can bring several advantages for their community. Wrong verb form
establishing
First
, the econemy
in Correct your spelling
economy
this
area will make progress rapidly. For example
, as soon as the new university
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is build
build
, many stores will be established soon Change the form of the verb
building
such
as restaurants, bookstore
, car rental stores, and so on which can make the community more convenient. Fix the agreement mistake
bookstores
Moreover
, the opportunity for seeking a job will be increase and people could go to job easily without concerning the cost and time on
commuting.
In conclusion, Change preposition
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although
living nearby university
may have some drawbacks such
as traffic jam
and the problem of management, I still consider that it would bring more benefits.Fix the agreement mistake
jams
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