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The government has announced that it plans to build a new university. Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establish a new university in your community. Use specific details in your discussion.

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Few people consider that building a new college from authorities in their living area will bring some negative impact while others disagree about that. Related to
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 essay. On the one hand, living
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the
university
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 may have some disadvantages for the residents.
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, once students all moved to the area which nearby their school, it will result in
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jam
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 the rush hour. As result, people need to get up more early to take public transportation commute to work, they may have less energy to be concentrate on their work.
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, it is harder for the city
concuil
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council
 to manage the trash in the community if the popularity gradually increase.
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university
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 will recure new students every year but it means that
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concuil
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council
 need to announce the rules of recycling and the
acurate
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 way to throw trash annual year.
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, we
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could
 not
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guarantee
 that our
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 would keep clean as usual.
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,
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 a new college can bring several advantages for their community.
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, the
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economy
 in
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 area will make progress rapidly.
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, as soon as the new
university
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build
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, many stores will be established soon
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bookstore
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bookstores
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, car rental stores, and so on which can make the community more convenient.
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, the opportunity for seeking a job will be increase and people could go to job easily without concerning the cost and time
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 commuting. In conclusion,
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 living nearby
university
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 may have some drawbacks
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 as traffic
jam
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jams
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 and the problem of management, I still consider that it would bring more benefits.

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