The government has announced that it plans to build a new university. Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establish a new university in your community. Use specific details in your discussion.

Few people consider that building a new college from authorities in their living area will bring some negative impact while others disagree about that. Related to
this
argument, there are several benefits and drawbacks which I will explain in
this
essay. On the one hand, living
near
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the
university
may have some disadvantages for the residents.
Firstly
, once students all moved to the area which nearby their school, it will result in
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jam
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the rush hour. As result, people need to get up more early to take public transportation commute to work, they may have less energy to be concentrate on their work.
In addition
, it is harder for the city
concuil
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council
to manage the trash in the community if the popularity gradually increase.
For instance
,
university
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the university
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will recure new students every year but it means that
city
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concuil
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council
need to announce the rules of recycling and the
acurate
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accurate
way to throw trash annual year.
Consequently
, we
counld
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could
not
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guarantee
that our
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would keep clean as usual.
On the other hand
,
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a new college can bring several advantages for their community.
First
, the
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economy
in
this
area will make progress rapidly.
For example
, as soon as the new
university
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is build
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build
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building
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, many stores will be established soon
such
as restaurants,
bookstore
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, car rental stores, and so on which can make the community more convenient.
Moreover
, the opportunity for seeking a job will be increase and people could go to job easily without concerning the cost and time
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commuting. In conclusion,
although
living nearby
university
may have some drawbacks
such
as traffic
jam
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jams
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and the problem of management, I still consider that it would bring more benefits.
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