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Some people prefer to live in a house, while others think that there are more advantages living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages to living in a house rather than in an apartment?

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Nowadays, some
people
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 prefer to live in a
house
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 and other types of
people
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 like to live in an
apartment
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 than a
house
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, and they think that to live in an
apartment
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, is good and gives a lot of advantages. The below-written essay discusses the minds and gives a number of examples and experiments. On the one hand, some
people
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 like to live in a
house
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 or flat, because their
life
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 manner is a habit and suitable to live there. They think, if the
people
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 live the cottage or
house
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, their behaviour and lifestyle become wonderful and better than the other types of community and can live easily in
life
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.
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, the
people
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, which is
life
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 in the
house
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, never do hard
work
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,
for instance
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, garden and housework
work
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. In my view, that har
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 factors become disadvantages to living in an
apartment
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 and show us to carrying out the
life
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 a
house
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 is comfortable and useful. On the one side, those categories of
people
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 are right too.
On the other hand
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, the
second
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 groups of
people
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 are right.
furthermore
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, the apartments are more comfortable and give several advantages than the
house
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 or cottage, because If the
people
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 carrying out their lives in an
apartment
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, they feel very strong and emotional in due to
house
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 and heavy garden and other works.
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, if the
people
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 live in an
apartment
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 in the village, certainly, they
work
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 a lot in the garden every day and because of that labour and like that types of tasks, the
people
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 become on a healthy and rarely, almost never, they feel themselves on the depression. In my look, those opinions are correct too. In conclusion, I join, the
second
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 category of
people
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. In my view, the apartments, there are amount of advantages for
people
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 lifestyle, healthy, and of course, they are nervous.
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,
people
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 live in the apartments near big and large mountains, gardens, lakes and others, they will be funny. They do not be nervous and angry about the small negative details.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • privacy
  • outdoor activities
  • gardening
  • customization options
  • renovate
  • structural changes
  • investments
  • appreciation/depreciation
  • maintenance costs
  • utility costs
  • security features
  • gated entries
  • surveillance systems
  • shared amenities
  • community centers
  • suburban
  • rural areas
  • commutes
  • urban centers
  • public transport
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