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Some people prefer to live in a house, while others think that there are more advantages living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages to living in a house rather than in an apartment?

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Nowadays, some
people
 prefer to live in a
house
 and other types of
people
 like to live in an
apartment
 than a
house
, and they think that to live in an
apartment
, is good and gives a lot of advantages. The below-written essay discusses the minds and gives a number of examples and experiments. On the one hand, some
people
 like to live in a
house
 or flat, because their
life
 manner is a habit and suitable to live there. They think, if the
people
 live the cottage or
house
, their behaviour and lifestyle become wonderful and better than the other types of community and can live easily in
life
.
Consequently
, the
people
, which is
life
 in the
house
, never do hard
work
,
for instance
, garden and housework
work
. In my view, that har
work
 factors become disadvantages to living in an
apartment
 and show us to carrying out the
life
 a
house
 is comfortable and useful. On the one side, those categories of
people
 are right too.
On the other hand
, the
second
 groups of
people
 are right.
furthermore
, the apartments are more comfortable and give several advantages than the
house
 or cottage, because If the
people
 carrying out their lives in an
apartment
, they feel very strong and emotional in due to
house
 and heavy garden and other works.
For example
, if the
people
 live in an
apartment
 in the village, certainly, they
work
 a lot in the garden every day and because of that labour and like that types of tasks, the
people
 become on a healthy and rarely, almost never, they feel themselves on the depression. In my look, those opinions are correct too. In conclusion, I join, the
second
 category of
people
. In my view, the apartments, there are amount of advantages for
people
 lifestyle, healthy, and of course, they are nervous.
Moreover
,
people
 live in the apartments near big and large mountains, gardens, lakes and others, they will be funny. They do not be nervous and angry about the small negative details.
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