In many countries youngsters are more aggressive and disrespectful now compared to the past. Why is this happening? What can be done to improve the situation?

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Perhaps all over, Adolescents in some countries are more impolite and rude now rather than adolescents in the past. I agree with

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topic and will provide reasons for it and provide some countermeasures for it.

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, in

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nuclear family, Parents are now busy in

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hectic world and unable to take care of their

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. They did not teach how to behave with other people especially, older people.

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children

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mingle with their neighbours during festival times, they really do not know how to give respect to grown-ups.

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is mainly due to more number of nuclear families existing.

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, the survey concludes that 80% of the

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are more stubborn when compared to adolescents in the past.

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, Parents give more pamper to their

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and missed to teach good manners.

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this

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can be implemented only by the

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which would teach punctuality, discipline and politeness.

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, The

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would not only teach academic lessons but

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disciplinary lessons.

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is really required

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type of attitude in their young age.

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, they could have attained good qualities

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as team spirit, team leadership and

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build their confidence.

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, In the recent cricket women's world cup, India lost by one run against England but they still won billions of people's hearts in India due to their fair play

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in the world cup.

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, the captain of the Indian team spoke to the media that

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type of

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would possible only because of our

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. The

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taught us how to behave even you are on the losing side. To conclude,

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can never change their

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when they are in nuclear families.

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, we can see

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change in

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in terms of politeness and discipline when they started going to

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and attending these disciplinary lessons.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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4 paragraphs

304 words

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In many countries youngsters are more aggressive and disrespectful now compared to the past. Why is this happening? What can be done to improve the situation?

Your opinion

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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