Some people prefer to live in a house, while others think that there are more advantages living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages to living in a house rather than in an apartment?

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Nowadays, some
people
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prefer to live in a
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and other types of
people
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like to live
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in an
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apartment
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than
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house
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, and they think that to live in
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apartment
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,
it
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is good and gives a lot of advantages. The
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essay discusses the minds and gives a number of examples and experiments. On the one hand, some
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like to live
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house
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or flat, because their
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manner is
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and suitable to live there. They think, if the
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live the cottage or
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, their behaviour and
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life style
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lifestyle
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become wonderful and better than the other types of community and can live easily in
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.
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, the
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, which is live
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the
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,
they
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never do hard
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,
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, garden and
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works
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. In my view, that har work factors become disadvantages to
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an
apartment
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and show us to carrying out the
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a
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is comfortable and useful. On the one side,
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categories of
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are right too.
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, the
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groups of
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are right.
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, the apartments are more comfortable and give several advantages than the
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or cottage, because If the
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carrying out their
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in
appartment
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apartment
, they feel very strong and emotional in due to
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and heavy garden and other works.
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, if the
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live
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apartment
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at
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the village, certainly, they work a lot
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the garden every day and because of that labour and like that types of tasks, the
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become
on
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apply
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a
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healthy and rarely, almost never, they feel themselves on the depression. In my look, those opinions are correct too. In conclusion, I join, the
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categories
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of
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od
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people
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. In my view, the apartments, there are amount of advantages for
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life style
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lifestyle
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, healthy, and of course,
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nervous.
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,
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live the apartments near
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big and large mountains, gardens, lakes and others, they will be funny. They do not be nervous and angry
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the small negative details.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • privacy
  • outdoor activities
  • gardening
  • customization options
  • renovate
  • structural changes
  • investments
  • appreciation/depreciation
  • maintenance costs
  • utility costs
  • security features
  • gated entries
  • surveillance systems
  • shared amenities
  • community centers
  • suburban
  • rural areas
  • commutes
  • urban centers
  • public transport
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