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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages togeather. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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It is always argued that some
people
 believe that
music
 can bring different
people
 from different cultures and ages together. In fact, in my point of view,
music
 can be a good way to bring
people
 altogether so I totally agree with
this
 opinion.
To begin
 with,
music
 is one of the oldest ways of connecting early humans. They express their needs and feelings like when they are happy or sad by making special sounds with rocks and stones or other not sophisticated tools. So from
then
, as the centuries have passed,
people
 learn to improve their
music
 language which can cause
music
 to be more effective between
people
 all over the
world
.
For example
, in ancient times, when they want to start a war they play a huge horn which spread the sound over the country to warn
people
 and be ready. In today's modern
world
,
however
,
in addition
 to
music
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 there are lots of technological devices and
also
 social media which help globalization to grow fast but
music
 have more influence between
people
 from different nationalities.
In other words
, singers like Micheal Jackson
who
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whom
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 songs
music
 about being free many years ago but it is still a symbol of being free in the globe or even some American artists sing a song about woman's power and show the whole
world
 the equal rights between men and woman and bring all the woman's together to say them they can be anything they like . In summary, from the past until now,
music
 can spread over the
world
 easily and make everyone with various cultures and ages all together.
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