Computers are becoming an essential part of education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is generally acknowledged that thanks to the development of technology, students are able to learn efficiently with various electronic apparatus including

computers

. Regarding

this

, I strongly agree with

this

assertion, and there are certain reasons.

Firstly

, using

computers

is energy-saving as children do not need to consume their energy on

carring

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carrying

caring

heavy bags. Since they have to bring hard-covered books and other

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materials

such

as pencil cases, their

commutement

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commitment

to go to

schools

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is

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in

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the difficulty

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difficulty

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. In

this

regard, they can save e-books and electronic documents that are very light to move.

Therefore

, youngsters can allocate their energy to productive activities

such

as studying and exercise.

For example

, recent media reports that about 20% of parents are willing to buy

computers

for their kids because they do not want that their own child

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from the excessive strains of educational

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materials

.

Secondly

, using

e-book

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e-books

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is

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more environmental

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environmental

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friendly than using physical books as electronic

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materials

are not required the consumption of papers.

For instance

, when 1

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of paper are made, 12 trees are cut. As the example clearly illustrates, using

computers

can reduce

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deforestation

that

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is an urgent issue in contemporary society.

Finally

, electronic machinery facilitates a significant of individuals to study economically as they can participate in another land's classes remotely rather than going abroad. the majority of language schools in Canada provide online classes, thereby leading to the

increase

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number of participation in classes by video

confrencing

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conferencing

such

as Zoom. In terms of

this

, it is reasonable to point out that

guardiances

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guardians

can save money on their children to study overseas. In conclusion, there is no doubt to point out that

computers

help children studying with saving energy,

environmental

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friendly and economically.